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yeah this is a design inspired by a pic here on DA [link]

allthought it doesn`t look much like the flower in the pic anymore lolxD but anyways i kinda like the dress ^^ it`s made of silk :3 and the person who`s wearing the dress is my little personal model xDD :iconvanilla-reni:`s persona Vanilla <3 (she said i can use her anytime for my designs)

this is a pic i used for reference : [link]

besides that i`s coloured with my markers once again because i wanted to look if i still can colour with copics XD what do you think ? ;3

so yeah i hope ya all like it <3

karo

design and art are (c) to me

P,s: the scanner ruined the colours ..as always hope it still looks good enough

Critiques


:iconblueangel1122:
I love your use of different shades of blue, it makes this outfit very interesting looking but not overwhelming, which I think it could have been if a lot of colors had been used, well done.

The anatomy of this reminds me of fashion design sketches that I did for a while, if that was your intention then good job - you're on the right track! If not however, her legs may be a bit too long and her neck as well.

A couple other minor things, her arms - at the elbow joints - seem a bit stiff, a little bend in them would make them come across as a great deal more natural. Also, adding a little bit of a shape to the kneecap area would make her legs seem a little more realistic and create a sense of seamless flow down the leg, right now they look a bit choppy.

I LOVE how you handle the foot/ankle area, that is something I have struggled with for years, you did an outstanding job with that. My hat's off to you.

Also, great work in the waist/hip area - she looks thin but not boyish!

Overall - great job and keep practicing! happy trails! :)
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:iconvanilla-reni:
ASDFSdflksadlfkjs dfaf skdf asf *__________*
awwwwwwwwwww ich freu mich jedes mal wenn du vanilla zeichnest q_________q <33333
du zeichnest sie so süß x3333
und ihre oufits *Ä*
sooo gaaaail <33
awww man ich liebe es >w< <3333 *sich rießig freu*
und die farben und die idee mit der blume .... *Ü*
oh man was soll ich dazu sagen?? XDDD
ich finds nur geil x3
und freu mich dass vanilla model sein darf y_y <3

hab diiich liiiiiiieb thankyouuuu karooooooow QwQ <3333 *karo umherwirbel*
:iconcaffieneandcandy:
beautiful design, i love blue *w*
lovely colouring, nice work =w=:heart:~
:iconwooddy:
*gasp* lovin the boots :)
:iconclepclep:
Really love the colours. c:
:iconl-karo-l:
thanks a lot x3 glad you like them

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:iconl-karo-l:
aww thanks so much :hug: yeah i think they`re cool too :D

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*gets shot*

Fashion put it all on me
Don't you want to see these clothes on me
Fashion put it all on me
I am anyone you want me to be



avater was made by ~pittysoares :3
:iconl-karo-l:
aww thanks sooo much ^^ glad you like it <333

--

*gets shot*

Fashion put it all on me
Don't you want to see these clothes on me
Fashion put it all on me
I am anyone you want me to be



avater was made by ~pittysoares :3
:iconl-karo-l:
awww reniii xDD ich frue mich wirklich jedesmal wenn du dich so sehr freust ^^ und ich zeichne vanilli immer gerne sie ist schliesslich so süz x3
hihi naja die idee kam spontan von daher xD

aber ich finde es gibt bessere designer und zeichner als mich :3 von daher sollte ich mich lieber glücklich schtzen das ich vanilla "missbrauchen" kann XD

aww hab dich auch ganz dolle lieeb ;w; *reniganzdolligknuff* und dankeschön fürs fav ^^

--

*gets shot*

Fashion put it all on me
Don't you want to see these clothes on me
Fashion put it all on me
I am anyone you want me to be



avater was made by ~pittysoares :3
:iconczarnaxx:
beautiful ! :+fav:
:D

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